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北方的山有北角 2021-5-28 14:39:36
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哦_ 2021-5-28 14:46:31 You take my umbrella, your spring pocket will be barbecued.
降蓉十八掌 2021-5-28 17:15:51 XGU
文斯莫克.山治 2021-5-28 17:24:55 Please don’t take away others’ J.
Petrichor 2021-5-28 17:29:23 Please taking home an umbrella only yours
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你倫敦我紐約 2021-5-28 17:34:58 Please take your umbrella by bus
平凡又不起眼 2021-5-28 17:38:23 If no ur umbrellaaaaaaa, no take
638422762 2021-5-28 17:38:27
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DicNat 2021-5-28 17:40:27 no umbrella no take
屌你無圖 2021-5-28 17:40:37 Suck my balls
有光在等著我 2021-5-28 17:50:49 Grab 已經有人睇唔明啦

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HenryN8 2021-5-28 20:01:30 Don’t take away others umbrella

有幾人撚難呀屌⋯⋯
簽賬免找數 2021-5-28 20:11:46 Make sure you’re taking your own umbrella
請只取走自己的雨傘

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屌屌屌屌我 2021-5-28 23:03:15 Take your umbrella only
777幾時死 2021-5-28 23:13:45 Please check whether the umbrella belongs to you before you take it away

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If you pick up an umbrella, please check whether it is yours before you take it away.

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敖狗(200萬戰力) 2021-5-28 23:16:28 咁累贅
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九唔搭八盧海鵬 2021-5-29 00:55:57 偷遮死全家,
Don’t steal umbrella
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一貧 2021-5-29 14:15:05 Take your own umbrella bitch
屌,攞自己遮
巴士仔 2021-5-29 15:05:30 睇咗成編,你寫得最好,簡單易明
小灰灰 2021-5-29 15:08:29 此回覆已被刪除
掃地研究生 2021-5-29 15:16:02 diu, 邊L個take my umbrella

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av榮 2021-5-29 15:17:39 don't take others umbrella
納Dee轉燈 2021-5-29 15:55:21 Grammarly helps you be concise.
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Indomie包裝 2021-5-30 14:35:22 Please/Kindly check before taking the umbrella.
或者比較直接
Do not take away others' umbrellas.
Only take your umbrella.

請勿取走他人雨傘。

英文同中文本質唔同,讀者嘅文化背景都唔同,英文多數比較直接,尤其是好多時英文要多個words去表達一個好簡單嘅中文phrase。請勿英文就係Do not/ no, 好少會please do not,因為Do not 嘅語氣係order。例如請勿吸煙,No smoking,而啲signs上面好少寫please do not smoke. Please多謝係用起reminder度。例如please mind the platform gap.

最重要係,標語本身就唔應該冗長,唔洗乜都畫公仔畫出腸。例如叫人唔好食煙,你唔會話請不要燃點並吸食香煙,please do not light up and smoke cigarettes。讀得個sign嘅人唔會望住佢太耐或者諗太多,所以寫出個重點,知你噏乜,直截了當就得,你寫到又冗又長只會令人TLDR。

而起呢個情況下,英文應該係check就夠,check if the umbrella is yours其實有啲當人白痴同accuse拎遮嘅人會偷遮。雖然大家都知,但無必要寫到出腸。

英文呢三句有唔同意思同語氣,視乎出標示嘅人想提醒定警戒人,formal or not. 仲有英美式嘅分別。

中文我諗唔到有咩辦法寫得婉轉啲。但都係嗰句,無人會睇到個sign就覺得offended,帶到主題就得。
Kingkongkong 2021-11-19 13:53:19 Please make sure the umbrella belongs to you before taking it away.