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2019-6-25 21:38:09
Hi 多謝樓主 😎😎 Can I give a suggestion to this sentence: ”We urge our government to agree to our three demands.”
I would suggest the below amendment:
“We urge our government to agree to HongKongers three reasonable requests:”
As the words “demands” has significant links to people who take things hostage, I believe it would be more appropriate to use the word “requests”, which accurately reflect the means by which we are asking the government to handle those 3 items. If we are trying to gain sympathy from the word, we need to maintain the spirit of cordial dialogue in the discussion.