[12月啦] 2017 Eng 5**升grade團 (5)

希哥 2016-12-17 18:22:44

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今晚到你
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會唔會幫手睇paper 3
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有乜問題要睇

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泉水姊姊 2016-12-17 19:23:40

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今晚到你
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會唔會幫手睇paper 3
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有乜問題要睇
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language organization個啲

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泉水姊姊 2016-12-17 19:24:22 希哥快啲睇我篇文

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純情小毒丁 2016-12-17 20:27:07

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希哥 2016-12-17 21:24:53

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今晚到你
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會唔會幫手睇paper 3
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有乜問題要睇
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language organization個啲
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content分中得七七八八
除非係禽獸grammar
否則都上到4/5

離地派膠俠 2016-12-18 19:04:38 push

希哥 2016-12-19 00:23:21

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被屌完唔好唔開心

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為你好

希哥 2016-12-19 15:59:34

希哥幾時出新片
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呢兩日內

泉水姊姊 2016-12-19 18:09:48

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被屌完唔好唔開心
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上4真係咁難

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高天鷲死老豆 2016-12-19 18:16:07

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上4真係咁難
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好想升grade

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希哥 2016-12-19 20:05:38 學句構唔該多睇報紙
scmp都有letters from readers
睇下人地發表咩意見會點表達
你地憑本身3底的英文又少睇英文一星期交十篇都唔會有咩progress

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要多睇先derive到啲非港式句構

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乖啦好嘛

嬰國寶城 2016-12-19 20:25:21

學句構唔該多睇報紙
scmp都有letters from readers
睇下人地發表咩意見會點表達
你地憑本身3底的英文又少睇英文一星期交十篇都唔會有咩progress
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要多睇先derive到啲非港式句構
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乖啦好嘛

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希哥 2016-12-20 16:51:02 push

雙雙 2016-12-20 17:32:43 成品英文版：

There is no escaping the fact that it is considered very important to note that a number of various available applicable studies ipso facto have generally identified the fact that additional appropriate nocturnal employment could usually keep juvenile adolescents off thoroughfares during the night hours, including but not limited to the time prior to midnight on weeknights and/or 2 a.m. on weekends.

巴打點睇#

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#fatc

鯨魚是你嗎 2016-12-20 21:28:50 HAY GOR
Paper 3 想拎5ABOVE
LANGUAGE ORGANIZATION 其實點可以拎高分D ?

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希哥 2016-12-20 22:25:08

成品英文版：

There is no escaping the fact that it is considered very important to note that a number of various available applicable studies ipso facto have generally identified the fact that additional appropriate nocturnal employment could usually keep juvenile adolescents off thoroughfares during the night hours, including but not limited to the time prior to midnight on weeknights and/or 2 a.m. on weekends.

巴打點睇<img src="/assets/faces/fatcmoji/fat022.gif" class="hkgmoji" />

得架啦靈活運用
真係咁寫可以等repeat

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希哥 2016-12-20 22:28:52

HAY GOR
Paper 3 想拎5ABOVE
LANGUAGE ORGANIZATION 其實點可以拎高分D ?
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假設你grammar無問題啦
Language其實係考appropriacy
用果種文體對果個對象到底appropriate與否決你能否拎5+/7
Organization 的話要千萬小心唔好濫用connectives
高大威猛補習天王成日教學生一定要用多啲however hence therefore
但其實你地作文好多時前後句根本無因果/相反關係
用多左反而會扣分

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希哥 2016-12-21 17:05:27 push

新手上路求指導 2016-12-21 17:10:08 留名

我愛孝敏bb 2016-12-21 17:14:29 Locker policy諗唔到第二個point

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希哥 2016-12-21 18:43:59

Locker policy諗唔到第二個point<img src="lihkg_android_asset/faces/normal/frown.gif" class="hkgmoji" />

拆散少少唔好當 health, fairness呢啲叫做一個point

希哥 2016-12-21 18:44:13

巴打係想直接inbox打篇文比你
定send個word file比你？<img src="lihkg_android_asset/faces/lomoji/07.png" class="hkgmoji" />

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我愛孝敏bb 2016-12-21 19:04:12

Locker policy諗唔到第二個point<img src="lihkg_android_asset/faces/normal/frown.gif" class="hkgmoji" />

拆散少少唔好當 health, fairness呢啲叫做一個point

第一個point就係health

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離地派膠俠 2016-12-21 21:35:28 希哥幾時出片

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