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加油 望今年成行
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嘩嘩喇 2017-2-21 18:18:49 巴打們有無報出面英文班提升英文??

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一對一好啲 但成本效益都唔係咁好
鬼佬收你4/500 一個 鐘

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嘩嘩喇 2017-2-21 18:46:59

尤其個啲EF , wall-street

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錢又無左，英文照舊唔識講
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我諗起有人講PTE係易過考IELTS
如果PTE ok既，咪試下囉
IELTS 都係考考試技巧啫

我都想試其它試 考ielts考到灰

小弟華安 2017-2-21 19:14:38 去日本考ielts比分鬆好多

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BrettAnderson 2017-2-22 02:29:06

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全都是走狗 2017-2-22 02:32:58 留名

dreamscometrue 2017-2-22 09:07:48 開始操writing
Task 1, Task 2 目標各8篇
有冇人搵過人改文 幾錢？

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行者無疆 2017-2-22 17:45:36

開始操writing
Task 1, Task 2 目標各8篇
有冇人搵過人改文 幾錢？

post上網睇下有冇有心人幫你執執啦

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dreamscometrue 2017-2-23 00:20:13

開始操writing
Task 1, Task 2 目標各8篇
有冇人搵過人改文 幾錢？

post上網睇下有冇有心人幫你執執啦

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post 左 睇下有冇人覆

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含德之厚髀瘀赤紫 2017-2-23 04:28:21

開始操writing
Task 1, Task 2 目標各8篇
有冇人搵過人改文 幾錢？

post上網睇下有冇有心人幫你執執啦

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post 左 睇下有冇人覆

可以幫下眼

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十年前考過 唔記得攞8定8.5
AL UE writing A

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七天旅程 2017-2-23 08:58:32 聽日出result好緊張

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dreamscometrue 2017-2-23 09:13:27 作左篇文 Writing Task 1

You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with the accommodation.
Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter,
· say what the problem is
· describe the accommodation you thought you were getting
· ask the provider to solve the problem



Dear Mr. White,

I am Peter Parker. I have enrolled in the summer course of "ABC" college to study English. I am living in a sharehouse arranged by the school. The location is close to the campus. It helps me save traveling time and focus on study but a quiet environment is also very important to study, which the current accommodation cannot provide.

I am living with 3 other students. As they are having a summer break of their study. It seems that they are in a holiday mood. They came back very late and made a lot of noise. They even held overnight parties several times. I have been wake up by them in the mid-night frequently. My rest have been interrupted, so my study.

It is a big contrast to my expectation which was a quiet environment with dedicated students. That would benefit my study and experiences.

I am wondering if your could arrange me to live with my coursemates who share the same schedule and goals.

I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,
Peter Parker

dreamscometrue 2017-2-23 09:18:27

聽日出result好緊張

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Dukkha 2017-2-23 09:30:20

聽日出result好緊張

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含德之厚髀瘀赤紫 2017-2-23 15:45:15

作左篇文 Writing Task 1

You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with the accommodation.
Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter,
· say what the problem is
· describe the accommodation you thought you were getting
· ask the provider to solve the problem



Dear Mr. White,

I am Peter Parker. I have enrolled in the summer course of "ABC" college to study English. I am living in a sharehouse arranged by the school. in which The location is close to the campus. (STATE THE PURPOSE OF THIS LETTER)It helps me (chinglish) save traveling time and focus on study but a quiet environment is also very important to study, which the current accommodation cannot provide.

I am living with 3 other students. As they are having a summer break of their study. It seems that they are in a holiday mood. They came back very late and made a lot of noise. They even held overnight parties several times. I have been wake up by them in the mid-night frequently. My rest have been interrupted(passive voice), so domy study.

It is a big contrast to my expectation which was(tense) a quiet environment with dedicated students. That would benefit my study and experiences. (too short, expand the paragraph)

I am wondering if your could arrange me to live with my coursemates who share the same schedule and goals.

I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,
Peter Parker

巴打你打算aim幾多分？
句子連接同grammar都有改善空間
同埋我諗你辭彙唔係好夠